March 31, 2008
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Ellen, Part 3, A Very Private Dance
This story starts with Parts 1 and 2. If you have not read them yet, refer to Rush’s Table of Contents.
The manager called the three contestants up on the stage one at a time, and after a few comments to the crowd he announced ‘L’ as the winner. “Catch them for a lap dance if they are willing,” he said rather lewdly. “And ‘L’ will be back to do another dance for us later.” The crowd cheered. Danielle joined Ellen at her table with Adam and the guys. She had come alone, and after their moments of rushed pleasure in the dressing room, a special bond had silently developed between the girls. Adam had a tequila drink ready for Ellen and, she made quick work of it offering the last third to Danielle. Adam ordered two more drinks for the girls. The waitress was very attentive to Adam. He always seemed to have a way of taking over any place they went into.
Ellen hadn’t been seated for five minutes when someone came over and asked if she would give him a lap dance. “I need to rest for a minute,” she said brushing him off. “What do you think, Adam, are lap dances out of the question?” He looked at her with his calm cool blue eyes and smiled, “No, I think you should do some lap dances. After all we don’t come here every day.”
Ellen’s breath skipped a beat. She could feel the warm moist area between her legs signaling her excitement. Adam asked her a few questions about what she liked, was she turned on, and who her favorites were. He was genuinely enjoying the fact that she was going crazy with excitement. Ellen marveled at his lack of jealousy and the way he was able to share her body with other men. She loved this part of him, and silently promised to herself that she would return the favor to him as soon as she could.
Suddenly, there was a tap on her shoulder and she turned to see Mr. Rich asking her for a lap dance. With a quick nod to Adam she took his outstretched hand and followed him to the V.I.P. area. Mr. Rich, she thought, has done this before. The V.I.P. area, in spite of the fancy name, was merely a section of 10 private booths along the back wall that was corded off with velvet ropes. The booths were each walled on three sides and had a heavy curtain in front. Inside there was a padded bench with a back that went from one side to the other. It was big enough for two to sit but Mr. Rich sat in the middle.
He introduced himself. Coincidently his name was Rich. “Don’t call me Dick” he said. He asked her if she had ever done a lap dance before, and she said no. Rich explained the rules of the club to her pretty much along the same lines as the manager had described them. She thought this was very nice of him. It seemed like he didn’t want to get her in any trouble. The music started and Ellen stood in front of him swaying to the music. It wasn’t terribly sexual; just normal club dancing. Suddenly, the curtain swung open and a man peeked in. The suddenness of it caused Ellen to release scream. He left as quickly as he came in. Rich explained that he was there to keep a count on who was doing shows and that he would show up at the start of each song. He also made sure that no one went too far.
Rich asked Ellen to take off her tube top and her skirt. In the rush before she went back on stage, she did not take the time to put on her bra or her black panties. She removed the pieces as he asked and stood before him in only her g string and high heels. She danced before him much slower than the beat of the music, barely moving her hips in front of him. As she swayed slowly she tried to move her hips in a sexually suggestive way. It seemed to capture his attention.
Rich was kind of an average looking guy but there were clear signs of success in his life. His clothes were nicely fitted, and he had the physique of someone who worked out regularly. His muscles weren’t bulging but his waist was trim and his chest and shoulders seemed to be proportioned nicely for his somewhat large frame. His dark black hair was cut short and added to his professional appearance. Ellen could imagine marrying a man like him; someone who seemed comfortable with himself.
Rich asked Ellen if he could suggest a few moves. “Anything you would like,” she said. “It’s your nickel.” He first told her to straddle his knee and then put her hands on the wall behind him. The he told her to rub her knee against the inside of his thigh. Ellen leaned on the wall and moved her leg along the inside of his thigh all the way to his crotch being gentle when she reached his balls. She looked at his crotch as she did this and she could see some stirring going on in his pants. Then he asked her to rub her crotch against his knee. Ellen had to crouch a bit to do this, but liked having her crotch pushed against his slacks. She was probably leaving a moisture trail along his tan pressed slacks.
Rich continued to suggest positions for Ellen. He had her turn her back to him and bend her ass into and onto his crotch. When she did this she could feel the hardness of his cock through his pant leg. It was positioned running down along the inside of his left leg, but was straining to stick up. She moved her ass back and forth in his lap. His legs were open and she was rubbing his cock with the side of her hip. He had her put both of her knees on the bench beside him straddling his lap. She lowered her pussy to his lap and ran it up and down ignoring the rhythm of the song. Both of them were very aware that her small naked breasts were right in front of his face. Her nipples had been hard all night. Now they were pointing directly into his eyes.
The song ended and she started to get off of his lap. “Please I will take another song.” His voice was slightly meek, almost pleading. She realized that this poor man was as turned on as she was. Maybe more so. Then he added, “In fact, I want a number of songs if that is all right with you.” She reminded him that it would cost him $20 per song. He said he would be willing to double her pay with tips if she lived up to his expectations. If she needed any more motivation (which she didn’t) that provided it.
Another song started. The curtain flashed behind her and she turned too late to see very much of the peeking man. However, she noticed a man outside the booth sitting at a table beyond the rope trying to look in at them. Rich asked her to stand for a minute and when she did, he reached into his pants and moved his cock around. She watched intently as he moved his hard tubular member so that it was aligned with his zipper. It was certainly big enough to be easily seen, even in the darkness of the curtained room. There was something about watching him so obviously that tickled her.
She returned to her last position with her breasts in front of his face, her knees on the bench straddling him and her crotch over his zipper. This time she could feel his member rubbing through his pants and her g string. She moved slowly along its length opening her own lips with its hardness. His eyes closed. She pushed her breasts forward and her nipples poked his closed eyes. He quickly opened them and she backed off, but kept her nipples within an inch of his face. She leaned back and put her hands on his shoulders, feeling every inch of his cock in her crotch. He moaned softly, “I love it when you touch me with your hands.” She was a bit surprised, but ran her hands down from his shoulder and across his chest. He moaned and she could feel his hips move under her pussy. Ellen undid one of the buttons of his shirt and moved her hand inside. He seemed to love this as she touched his skin and rolled her fingers over his nipples. She rolled her hips while she did this.
She could sense that her torso was getting a little heavy on his cock, so Ellen moved her feet to the floor. She pressed her breasts against his chest and slid down his body as she lowered her knees to the rugged floor. When her knees almost reached the floor her breasts lay in his lap. She pressed her tits against his bulging member as she went the last foot to the floor. Her hands were on his knee and she moved them up along his thighs, slowly toward his mounded lap. She looked into his eyes from her position on the ground between his legs. He was looking down at her, almost in a dream state, but with a sense of anticipation. Closer she inched toward his member. Knowing there was still time before the song ended, she ran her thumbs up against the edges of his stiffened cock. Up along its edges she went. Then Ellen positioned both hands right on top of his member as she slid them down its length slowly. She watched him as he groaned and smiled. His legs squeezed her sides. Her hands kept moving down his thighs and away from his most sensitive area. She watched his reaction to see if he would be frustrated, anxious or pissed off but he looked pleasantly teased as he stretched like a cat waking up and had the Cheshire grin to match.
She ran her hands up again along the tops of his thighs across his abdomen to his hips. Coming back down however, her hands again met in the middle and slowly traced the hardness of his member. His face was a reflection of his excruciating pleasure. He seemed to be enjoying the tease and was not in a hurry to cum. It occurred to Ellen how she could drain this man of every dollar he had by keeping him in this state. Rich most certainly wasn’t ready to quit. She stood up straddled one of his knees, put her hands against the wall and, put her knee into his crotch. She moved it slowly in long strokes. She felt in complete control as the music stopped. Along with her excitement she loved the feeling of power that she had over this man.
Ellen asked him how he was doing and if he was ready to quit. “I’d like to keep going,” he said. “But, I’m losing track of how many songs, so let me pay you now for what we have done.” He reached into his pocket and took out $100. As she took it from him, she wondered what she would do for change because she had left her money with Adam. Then Rich handed her another $20 and told her to keep the change as a tip. Wow she thought. He will be spending a lot of money on me. As the next song started, Ellen knew she wanted to please this man completely.
She leaned forward and put her breasts in front of his face. Rich seemed like a very disciplined student and didn’t move. He allowed her to dance with her breasts coming within a few inches of his face. Simultaneously her knee was in his crotch. Light came into the room as the curtain was opened again, but this time Ellen didn’t respond to it or turn around. She waited a minute for the potential swaying to die down. She deliberately placed her breast against Rich’s face. Yes, she thought, it was a violation of the rules, but she was pretty sure she wouldn’t get caught. He was startled at first, but soon realized that she was deliberately offering her tit to him. He eagerly sucked on it; sucking then releasing her nipple from the grasp of his mouth then licking and sucking again. “Nice,” she thought as her nipple got very hard and long.
She let him suck one then the other breast. While he was doing this, she undid a few more buttons on his shirt. She reached inside touching his bare flesh with her fingertips and palms. He loved her touch and, with more buttons undone she could get both hands in and around most of his upper torso. She removed her breasts from his face and leaned her head against his. She kissed him on the side of his face and the side of his neck. She whispered in his ear, “You can touch me if you want, as long as we don’t get caught.” Her hands had moved to his shoulders and now she moved them down along the sides of his arms encouraging him to wrap them around her. She felt his hands touch her thighs just below her ass. His cool hands felt good and sent a tingle through her body.
She lowered herself, kissing his open chest. Rather than go to the floor as she had done before, she only bent over. Then, she straightened up and turned around, placing her ass in his lap. In his lap was an overturned hull of a boat and, she had a perfect crease for it to rock back and forth in. She loved the feeling of his hardness running along her ass. His hands were on her hips and, after a few minutes he began to take more control of the rocking rhythm. She let him dictate the pace by rocking her hips while she kept her balance by pressing her hands against each side of the booth.
She bent forward to make more contact with her only slightly covered slit. She could do this for hours she thought. Could he? It worried her that he might be getting too close to orgasm, so she stopped the contact and turned around to face him. He was a mess. His shirt was open, his hair was mussed and he looked like he was beginning to get a little desperate for an orgasm. She was concerned about the song ending, so she straddled him. She sat on his lap but didn’t move. Ellen could feel that her pussy was wet and her lips were swollen. She gently began straightening Rich’s hair and, without redoing any of the buttons, closed his shirt. He was breathing hard and began to catch his breath. He showed no signs of anger or irritability, which surprised her. He’s probably had a hard on now for the past 3 hours and a raging one for 40 minutes, she thought. The song ended.
“Had enough?” she asked, then added “I don’t want to break anything.” “Not quite,” he replied, his voice cracking a bit. He was an interesting man she thought. Shy, quiet, disciplined and rich. All the qualities that one looks for in a man. The next song started and Rich had enough sense to remove his hands from her legs and put his hands back down on the bench. Ellen knew this would probably be the last song. Adam would be worrying. She began to rub her bottom along his lap again. Looking up toward the ceiling she was actually more conscious of how it felt to her than to him. From this angle, she could feel his member along her entire slit right up to clit. She had to tilt her hips as she rocked to get the full force across her clit. Her pussy was dripping moisture.
While she was rocking she felt the curtain swish and felt the flash of light. Just in time she thought as she pressed forward and leaned into Rich in order to get the full force of him against her clit. The angle was such that her breasts were just below his chin, their heads resting against one another like two lovers. Her soft hot breath loudly blowing across his ear and down into the nape of his neck. “You know, much more of this and I might just cum,” she whispered to him. “Please do,” he responded and, then added, “Do you want me to finger you?” “Oh, please. Yes.” She repositioned herself. With both of her knees on the bench, one between his legs one hand on the wall, her legs were open allowing him to easily reach her pussy with one hand. She could easily reach her hand across his lap and over his member, too and she did just that.
She was now straight forwardly masturbating him although it was through the thickness of his jeans. In return he was doing the same to her. Of course, all she had on was her g string. She could feel Rich’s gentle finger tips rolling softly though her soaked little patch of cloth. He remained on the outside of the material, but it felt wonderful when he was working around her clitoral area. She was simultaneously rubbing his mound with her hand and leaning her head forward nuzzling his neck. She did not want to kiss him on the lips. A few kisses on his neck and cheek would suffice. Kissing him on the lips seemed too intimate, she thought, aware of the massive irony.
Gawd his fingers felt good. Ellen was having a hard time concentrating on what she was doing and had to draw a little deeper to keep her focus. As she became more focused on him – rubbing near the top of his cock with the bottom of her palm in a small circle – she could feel him lose his concentration on her. But, like she did, he seemed to get it back. They went back and forth like this from feeling great to ecstatic, from being in control to out of it, for most of the song. He had explored her ass, grabbing it hard while she sat and rubbed on his wrist. He ran his thumb along the length of her lips; up and down a number of times even to her brown hole underneath her. He ran small circles around her clit and scratched the material over it with his fingertip, rubbing it quickly, bringing her to the edge of an orgasm. She pulled down hard on the material covering his member getting some movement of his foreskin. She traced a nurturing hand along the entire length. She pressed her palm on his most sensitive area and rubbed the material in circles over it. Finally she pulled down his zipper and reached inside leaving just the soft cotton fabric of his shorts between the fingers of her hand and his stiff, hard, fleshy cock.
Boxers or briefs she wondered just before she heard the song ended. A curse escaped her lips as she repositioned herself to sitting facing him on his lap. In this position her ass covered the fact that he was now unzipped. He grasped her legs behind her knees, which were both resting on the bench, and pulled her close rather tightly. Pulling at her was a way for him to release a little tension. They were both on the verge of an orgasm and as the new song started they had to wait for the checker. Ellen began rocking on his hips and rubbing her crotch and his member together. Doing this was keeping her excitement high as well as his. Where was the damn checker, she thought? She had to calm down and await his intrusion, but she wanted to just keep going. She bounced on Rich in a futile attempt to calm herself.
Suddenly the curtain moved and the usual flash of light seemed to hesitate for a while. She completely stopped moving for a second and the light disappeared. Oh thank god. She looked down at Rich. She smiled and he had a serious puppy dog look on his face. She lifted off, slid over and returned to the position she had before the music stopped. Her breasts wound up in a different spot right near his mouth. He started simultaneously to suck on her tit and rub her g string again while she reached inside his pants and found his waiting cock. It didn’t take long for him to start bucking his hips and, Ellen slowed it down just a bit. She wanted a minute to concentrate on her own orgasm before she let him squirt. She paused her thinking and felt him sucking and rubbing. He sensed her need and began to focus exclusively on her clit. Yes that’s it, she thought, that’s it. YES! She had an explosive release. She bucked and she could feel the juices let go beneath her and her legs wobbled a slight bit. It was still throbbing away like waves at a beach when she returned to concentrate on rubbing him. It took a few long slow strokes to get his hips moving and then she sped up her motion, rubbing quickly over the cotton material. Her legs were clasped around his thigh and her pussy gave her one more pulse just as he arched and began to shoot his load into his pants. She continued to rub him, slowing down and pulling harder to coincide with his hip thrusts. Even when it appeared he had finished ejaculating she continued to caress his cock and even reached below to lift his balls.
There was plenty of time left in this song for them to clean up and for Ellen to get dressed. Rich gave her another $100 bill. Ellen wished it was smaller bills because she was a little afraid of what Adam might think happened when she showed him how much she got paid for her “dancing.” She kissed Rich on the cheek and they left the private booth. He headed for the door worried whether his pants looked wet. She found her way back to Adam’s table alone.
Comments (42)
ohh boy… i have to catch up! O.O
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Mmmm.. I’ve been waiting for part three and you didn’t disappoint. That was hot! Will there be more? Oh I hope I hope I hope
@I_Am_Kuulei - Glad you liked it Kuulei. I may have more. I have some ideas for more of Ellen’s saga.
@MyPeacefulChaos - these stories do take a bit of time. Thanks for catching them.
Had to read it again. I want a lap dance like that! Love it.
@I_Am_Kuulei - i don’t always keep the beat but I give a mean lap dance.
Thank you RushmoreJ!! And I came to a conclusion, I chose D. to my suprise. I saw him the other day and he changed my mind.
Damn…your good…very, very good!
and when I want to be bad I’m just horrid!!
@ExposedWrists - thanks
Left speechless…..utterly…and You give lap dances? Humm….interesting to ponder..seriously great story..>>dysE<<
@DysonianEyes - Glad you enjoyed it
Hi – sorry I forgot to add you to my protected list….! you’ve been added. V
@venice - thanks
Very nice writing.
RYC: Ideally younger submissives tend to be all over the place. So much so, you never have a chance to train them. I am sure there are young subs other there who are not all over the place which is why- I am trying him out.
Good day to you
A
Very nice story
Great story. Very identifiable characters and actions. And good pace/flow. I have to admit that I’m in a hurry so I only read the first half but hope to come back for the rest (and the previous).
Thanks for making the connection
@curiousdwk - glad you enjoyed it. You’ll find there are a number of stories in my blogs and I’m trying to get a Table of Contents up soon.
@notsonicegirl - coming from you that a very nice comment!!
If I read any more I’m going to explode at my desk…hehe.. off to bed I go but not before I get some relief. Thanks Rush baby!
@msmae21 - three a day is normally the recommended doze for an adult. I think this makes 5 for you tonight. Tsk tsk
Make a number 4!
@LaLaLici0us - do you have any suggestions? Perhaps a private party with Adam and friends?
@RushmoreJ - sounds good to me
I think I love Rich. Great Story! Thanks.
So hot!
please make a part 4 soon lol!! maybe they can fuck in the private booth. or a 3some with the checker…
@CanadianConspiracy - i am working on a number of additional chapters for Ellen. Thanks for the ideas.
Aaaaannddd i’m spent
haha!
@singlemom_singshersong - I love that kind of talk.
@RushmoreJ - It’s true… sexually frustrated these days Rush. Gotta catch up on my stories every once and a while. In the span of part 2, and 3… I got off twice. What can I say… you’re an artist.
I shouldn’t read these at work..
Roowrrr…
@Mastema71 - hope your not working today
@RushmoreJ - About that, yea, I am working. Or at least trying to appear to be working.
@Mastema71 - maybe these can be a good way to pass the day but better call the SO and tell them to be ready
@RushmoreJ - Hahah, I told him that …..
He said, “we will see”He’s so frustrating..
Do you think I would do good at an amateur strip night? LOL!
@JUST_ME_1984 - a perfect fit. It could be your calling
This was such a tease, I loved it!
@boricua_chic_2008 - do you love to tease and be teased?
@RushmoreJ - Yes I do!
@boricua_chic_2008 - me too.
@RushmoreJ - Nice! I’ve been told I am a big tease lol.